Intro good, but repetitive
The intro is good, I like it. It progresses at the appropriate speed. at about 0:53 is when the intro ends and the song gets a little bit repetitive. You might want to have the same repeating melody but have the sounds themselves changed up a bit. IT does seem to end a bit abruptly but not too ubruptly.
I read the "author comments" and, it's not the most recent song ANYMORE XD. I just got FL and am learning how to use it :D I can see if you were this good after 6 months then maybe I can get that good if I get the same start and tutorials you did.
Good luck on the final version of this song.