you should make it longer

Work on it more and it may be a very good track.

My review, your song.

Intro is soft.

0:08 hihats I thought were a bit sharp/resonant for the song, but their doing a not ultra super duper basic rhytmhn, so thats fine.

To 0:30 drums build and become more elaborate. This is good.

0:55 neat drums, I think the bass/kick drums could have EQ'd to be a bit more prominent, or have other instruments duck behind them.

1:25 very cool bit there, really liking.

I don't find this song repetitive, and felt it could have been much much longer. The sound set used sounds very cohesive, the mixing is overall quite good, drums are diverse enough, instruments are interesting, and the melodies whilst they do repeat are very smooth flowing.

I felt the song had a sort of IDM drum sound. If you elaborate on this, you can swap out this for the new one.

8/10 4/5

Be sure songs are of a length that people can enjoy the piece fully.

Yep good

Nice.... Pity on the zero bombz... Bit repetitive but that's ok..