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4.2 MB
2 min 39 sec
4.40 / 5.00

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Rated 4.40 / 5 stars
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Author Comments

this probably woulda gotten lost as well... i didnt know what to do with this song so i just stopped workin on it, since im not sure what else to add to it i thought id put it on NG for some crit.



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Amazing instrumental...

Wrote some lyrics to this while listening to it, it's just such an easy instrumental to write to. I had already written 1m40s worth of raps before I even noticed it just off the top of my head. Let me know if you wanna read them, just message me and let me know. It's on an open permission Facebook account so no shady links. :P


Rated 5 / 5 stars

very bizarre

whatever is in that mind of urs, i gotta know 5/5

haywirehaywire responds:



Rated 5 / 5 stars

Very Romantic

As far as I can tell the beat is complete. All you need is logical flow on it.

haywirehaywire responds:

thanks bro.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


this shit is incredible! ma n***ah..idk what the tell is in ur head.. but whatevers in there is supercharging ur work xD

haywirehaywire responds:

hahaha thanks a lot man.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really dig it.

I like this a lot, my only gripe is that it's a bit short. I know you said you didn't know where to go with it (and believe me, I have a million of those too) but you have a lot going on in this song, you could double up some verses or throw a break or bridge in towards the end - just some quick-spur suggestions.

Not that anything is bad how this is - I don't think the sound is cluttered or anything. Just the song is over too soon for my tastes.

haywirehaywire responds:

i feel you on that thanks a lot gunstar.