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Date
11/28/2009
File Info
Song
3.9 MB
4 min 16 sec
Score
4.16 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 4.16 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Brit Pop
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Author Comments

Another lovely track from me, with lots of love and effort gone into it :)

If you dig this, check out my other stuff and stay tuned while I record more of my songs!

Story behind the song:

About me fed up with one night stands. In January 2009 at birthday party, I got with a girl and man, she was all over me. Like the gentleman I was, I made out with her. However, she hated me the very next day and made me look like a complete asshole to everyone in her school somehow, like I'm a pervert or something like that (it's an all girls school). If you're wondering - I was 19, she was 16. This pissed me off so much, I wrote a song about it a few days later and only just recorded it recently.

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Lyrics (some may be written wrong):

Go outside, take a look, close your eyes, say goodbye
Count to three, you won't see, the bullet aimed for you

Although we're not friends, had to deal with you

Wrap your arms, around me now, hate me another day
Stop the time, look behind, look who's the one to blame

Are ya scared it's you? Stopping all that's true?

Have a drink, have laugh, lure me into you
You think it's safe, to snatch my hand, and claim it wasn't you

Now I'm some kind of ass. Stripped of all my class.
Now I'm some kind of ass. Stripped of all my class.

(Bridge)
Dumb things happen, day and night, trying not to lose,
Feeling good isn't great, just look at all the clues

It's hard to think, I'm your friend, only for a night
The very next day, I go away, and come back to a friight

Was it something I did? Probably just you

Share a joke, maybe two, come out and show some sense
Take your head, straight outta there, stop being so damn tense

Was it something I said? Probably not true

Reviews


1Rab1Rab

Rated 3 / 5 stars November 20, 2010

meh

its not bad but the quality scratches at my ears.



BlueWaffelbandBlueWaffelband

Rated 4 / 5 stars October 16, 2010

Wow!

I really liked it. It has a really nice beat. Great tune, and amazing voice.Though i'm not much for Brit Pop this was quite nice!

4.22 / 5.00 (+ 0.030) =)



AccountableMassesAccountableMasses

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 9, 2010

Nicely done

enough said.


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ThatHunterRockerGuyThatHunterRockerGuy

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars January 9, 2010

Great

But I have a few suggestions...
Have you thought of a drum fill after the bridge, maybe the four bass drum beats, then some massive crazy drum thing? Im no expert on drums, so discard that if you want.
But maybe a proper heavy guitar solo is needed here near the end (after the drum fill after the bridge?) to really show off. Then it can continue like the first solo. If you really want to do this, heavy distortion, low bass, middle middle and high treble, and use the minor pentatonic scale with a few partial chords mixed in. Find a couple of nice sounding riffs, and repeat them over and over in the verse :)
Other than those little things, I can find no fault with this song. I think maybe the vocals are a little off at some places, but that is expected with Brit pop, i think.
Great work!


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SlashByteSlashByte

Rated 5 / 5 stars January 9, 2010

Wow

This is really beautiful! I loved the beat, the tune, and your singing was really lovely! Bravo!

By the way I have never really ventured into Brit pop, and I've never liked pop, so I guess this review really means something! Your song just blew me away ;)


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darbyjack responds:

Well, most the stuff in this section isn't even Brit-Pop and not made by Brits like me :) I am glad it blew you away - raised a little smile on my face!