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Well,the fact thath you jumped into the main melody right from the start its very helping me give you a higher score or a better review.
You should have built up and then relesed the melody.
Or on the other side you could have done and intro and counter the main melo in.
I would have made a piano intro or something.
I really like the synths that start from 1:00
The piano(or whatever that is) that starts at 2:02 kinda overpower's the melody.
Other then that,i think you should have added your own created melody cuz most of the "Crying Soul" remixes sound exactly like that... same old melody and nothing new.
So...think about that.
Hopes this help.
-HiddenWalrus