hey

Well it's a good track, nice melodies and sounds, nice intro, i think you built it up too fast tho, didn't take enough time to develop melodies and really put them in, you could put some more work into the passes.

Overall this sounds like you didn't really take enough time for it to really realise it's potential. Take more time, put more love into your tracks man ;)

Gonna go check that ambient one now.
Keep it realz :D