Exquisite

All I can say is wow.. This must have took a lot of time. Who would've ever thought about doing that? Not me, that's for sure...

didn't make it on this one

Well, its TOO LOUD AND DISTORTED. Sorry ROFLCOPTER but this one just had too much distortion to hear it properly. The monitor window must have been RED the whole time. LOL. anyways i don't think its as good as some of your other ones, but you have more than enough to make up for one bad apple ;P

Keep them comming and i look forward to more of your songs!

A lot of distortion on the bass kick-in

I really like the way you start off with a simple riff and kick it in.

You tend to have too much of a build-up after that, if at all.

You should follow a beat structure of the common 4, 4, 4.. build-ups. You're aiming at a song that's meant to rock, so you should focus on stick to the music maths.

Not a great song in this current form, but would definately make a killer with a tiny bit of rework.

Good job.

Woah.

I like pie. But this was better than pie. I like blueberry pie more. But that is my favorite food. And music you cannot eat. I do not like asparagus. But this song is not asparagus. And that is why i love it.

WHOOT OMG YAY

SEXY!!!

Dude, i admire your song. I have attempted to work my way through fruity loops, but never quite got a beat that cool! why did you stop the cool beat! gosh, good song... :]