Not bad but...

It feels kind of jerky and really more dissonant than the original. This is a problem for me, because the harmonies in the original were what I liked best about it. The actual writing/playing of the remix is perfect, it's your choice of synths that could maybe use a little work, they're slightly out of tune with each other.

I'm looking through your submissions because I found your topic on the Descent BB while I was looking for an old thread of mine. I've done some D2 music remixes/covers as well (not either of the songs you did), maybe we could compare our work to give you a chance to criticise mine as well -- and maybe to give you an idea for some synths that might work better, without the dissonance.