Shows promise
The high end and the strings sound great. My problem is with the low end. They sound like a drone that is just there, and is not particularly... melodic? (can't find the right word) Sometimes it interferes with the high end, especially at the beginning at 0:23-0:27, and the muddy sound takes me out of the sort of dreamlike state the high end creates.
Overall, not bad, but not great. The strings are awesome, though.