meow

A lot of the elements in this track are really well practiced and the elements come together really well. There's just one thing that kind of gets me and it would be the snare. This song would sound perfect with a punchier snare sound. Try these: up the snare you already have in the mix, try out an ounce of distortion, layer it with some more snare sounds... experiment with it. Everything else in this song is really nice. It's just the lack of a powerful snare that takes away from the rest of the mix. Other than that, awesome song!