What do you think?
iits just the same thing
plus different drums, a few changed effexcts n shit, sum tweaking of levels and such here and there---maybe my only criticism would be not to submit something until it is donee,, or at least if you're going to do it like you did then at least change it enough so it is significantly different... not that i don tlike, its totally bitchin
Well, I was submitting this song each time I changed something thinking that I could get it deleted every time by a moderator. But after the 3rd time of asking he stopped replying..so now I have 2 versions of the song somewhat the same. That goes for the song "alcoholic" too. I changed the name to dipsomaniac and added some more stuff, submitted it, and now I have a mastered version of it (I think it fucking rules) that i want to send in but don't want a whole bunch of the same song.
I submitted it to another account and it's been under judgement for almost 6 days.
Good stuff
It's a good basis for a trk, i think it would be cool if u could mashitup a bit more by adding stop-start crunchy drums and glitching it up a bit, also maybe try adding a fuzzy sub-bass to really give it a fuller sound.
It's cool, but would definately benfit from some proper messing:)
Feel free to mess with it all you want. Maybe when you get Reason I could send you the MIDI file or somethething..Add your style to it.
Few artist have that cool glitching sound that you add to your tracks. It's influenced alot of the music I've made. I kind of add my litle touch to the whole idea in my songs. Or I'd like to.
Thanks for the review man.
-jon
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
JonH2O 
