Nice try, a few things

First thing, you want to be professional with music. You're not ghetto, this isn't kindergarten, so you can spell things correct.

To the user below me, you're really deaf, it's a man laughing not "AH AH AH"

The first beat was nice, the second sounded like shit to me, too heavy on the kick. The melody was very well done, props to that. The beginning sounded like FL Keys (presuming you use Fruity Loops) and SimSynth, but it changed as it went along and it sounded ten times better.

Cheers! And check out some of my songs
-r2

nice

nice... 1. make it longer cuz its kinda awesome
2. dude the beat is really nice !
3. take the ''AH AH AH AH '' out of the song please

keep it up!