Pretty good, kind of simple

It is acceptable. If is a WIP try to improve more on the background.

the beats are just not supportive.

something with different beats but the same instrument cant get a good rap. experimenting isnt good when your only experimenting with a couple instruments. experiment using complicated synths having it sound mediocre or average and have it get a 5 instead of 3 out of ten. experimenting is just another way of saying judge this critically to help me find new experiments.

-TomE

p.s. ALL my songs are experiments.