Could've Done With Some Techno

The start was actually really good, but after a while it got a lot worse. After the first lot of "maybe we'll shine forever"s, it could have gone into a Cascada-like techno bit. As much as I hate techno, I think that would sound pretty good. The timing between the music and vocals was off too, and I have a feeling the vocals had a different beat to the music. I also think it would have been good with a few more verses, like the first verse. If it was more like that, I might actually listen to it.

HAHAHAH

no man. what have you done? you know the massive flaming ur gonna get 4 that?

wow

this started out ok but it went downhill from there. the timing of the music was horrible and the lyrics definitely did not fit the music. good luck on your other ones but this one was absolutely horrible.

nice

Okay here's the thing....you need to stop the voices when the music starts okay...coz if was kool until that drum came in

far away...

please stay far away from music.you hurt it.