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11/06/2009 | 11:42AM EST

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Classical Song | 6.4 MB | 5 min 34 sec

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4.09 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Another piano solo piece.
I was inspired by Elfen Lied (the manga). I had just finished it and I started playing piano, so when I had a general idea i wrote it on my computer, and there it is ^_^
It's both sad and happy, 98 bpm, made in around 30 minutes.

Hope you like it!

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Average Score: 9.2 / 10

Score: 9
Xyirx

"Bright and emotionally expressed"

by: Xyirx
date: November 6, 2009

This piece is full of melodic sounds. It is really touching when you have one instrument such as piano which has the greatest sound range, compared to other instruments, shows off its sensitivity alone. I like the chord you use (Bb, is it?). Though it's repetitive for 5 min song, it's lingering in listener's head for such a long time.

Accompaniment from strings and woodwinds can bring this piece even more dramatic.

November 7, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks ^_^
I have no idea what chord I used, I have no knowledge in music whatsoever, I just compose on the go, I never had the patience to learn the chords and such, but I know I should ^_^'
I'll try to add some other instruments like you proposed, thanks for the tips ^_^

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Score: 10
mmmburgers

"Amazing."

date: November 6, 2009

I love how much emotion this piece has, right from the very start it caught my hears on how emotional and melodic it sounded. Great job on that one. I wouldnt mind maybe remixing this haha, (thats if i get your permission first though) But yeah, great track. But one think that you could definitly do to give it mroe realisim is changing up the velocity of the keys. That would really really make the piano piece sound more realistic. 30 minutes really? Thats real good man, just imagine what you could come up with if you worked on this for lets say, a few hours! :O Haha.

Keep up the great work. Lovin the piano song so much, so melodic and emotional. Sooooo... How about that remix? eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh? haha.

Btw if you can, maybe you could listen to my piano solos? and maybe reviw them too :3 (rEtarded) and (Fuck me hard) I think you might like them :3

-Clayface

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November 7, 2009

Author's Response:

Haha thanks :D
You can definitely make a remix if you want, and tell me when you upload it ^_^

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Score: 10
Irateyourstuff

"wow"

date: November 6, 2009

you made a song this good in 30 mins what program did you use to make this song btw (trying to make audio submissions myself)

November 7, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks :D
I used FL Studio 9 for the whole thing. It's pretty expensive, but definitely worth it.

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Score: 8
wyldfyre1

"Elfen Lied, a great manga."

date: November 6, 2009

I'd say your inspiration was brought on by good things. IF anything you've not let down the inspiration for sure. Wonderful work on this as far as piano goes. As always i'm listening to this as i review, i feel if you added some strings into this that the song would shine a bit more also. Perhaps a soft rock type percussion. However all in all its a good listen. Keep it up for sure!

Wyldfyre1

November 7, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review ^_^
I just made an instrumental version, with strings and percussion, although it's pretty much the same, I didn't want to change it too much, but thanks again ^_^

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