JK:.Sky Touching


Date Submitted

11/05/2009 | 06:55PM EST

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Hip Hop - Modern Song | 1.5 MB | 1 min 36 sec

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3.61 / 5.00

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Author Comments

Yah so this is a verse that I plan on using, again.
I just wanted to test it and get some practice on the mic.
Enjoy.

So Im gonna kick a quick rhyme with rhythmn and style,
Sublime High Hymns, But sky touching may take a while, its wild.
The only thing on the brain is fame, but theres always rain on my damn parade,
I feel ashamed but my Mind frame is funny, Doing it for the money, doesnt seem so sunny,

I dont feel right, But I do when I write,
Its better than any high, wright brothers and Ill take flight,
My dreams in sight, But above cloud height, no love for me,
See, I'm Mr. Singular, I slur my emotions, In to words,

With my verbs, I take action, paradoxical relaxing, my mind is gapsing,
Been thinking too much again, clutching the pen, When I bottle up,
too much, I feel rushed, bot enough time in the day, but we die any way,
No way of knowing when you'll fade away, so play,

The cards you get, Live a live you'll be happy with, But I feel a giant pit,
sitting, wondering, trying to understand, why is our footplans on this land?
Why us here? Is this real? But every second wasted,
Time steals, and soon I won't even be real.

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Average Score: 9.3 / 10

Score: 10
Broken-Needle

"3.79 / 5.00 (+ 0.22)"

date: November 6, 2009

That was ill man, love it when producers rap you guys really know what you're doing with the way u deliver the beat and how u let the beat play out at the end. Flow was nice and the lyrics were awesome man=) fav'd

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Score: 8
KlazikNadi

"Excellent!"

date: November 6, 2009

Pretty good stuff here. Dont you mostly make beats? I really liked the lyrics, but I think your flow still has room for improvement. Overall good though. Keep it up!

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Score: 10
CKC2009

"JK RAPS?!!?!?"

date: November 5, 2009

what else LOL...

nice man soz about not sending u stuff

shits been busy..

make some more mc tracks ..

-¦- CKC -¦-

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