Score: 6

"lol, not bad..."

by: Darklight17

date: November 17, 2009

well, its a good rap, at least, although the swear words all over the place dont exactly help. Frankly u could name it Swear seeign as thats basically all it is ;)

The background music is srsly good though, theres a decent melody, maybe u could submit this without words and work a bit mreo on the background. Im sure it'd do well.

Overall, its a decent piece, a good rap but nice work really goes to the instrumetns in the background.

Darklight17
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Score: 7

"Hmmm.."

by: Kirbyfemur

date: November 15, 2009

For all it's worth it's entertaining. But it gets a little old after the thirtieth "Fuck" or "Shit" lol

The problem with a parody of a rap song, is you have to cuss even more than the actual songs. Cussing would be fine if it was used right, in which you seem to have tried to show here, but it's just a bit forced in my opinion.

I give you props for both randomness and for it being tired and just wanting to do something about it lol

None to bad, just be careful of becoming cliche. I mean that by parody cliches, not rap Cliches, those are just fine to use. =3

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Score: 8

"Sounds like a parody"

by: Haggard

date: November 14, 2009

And I really hope this is one. :P

You covered nearly everything I don't like about modern hip hop. Swear words all over the place, an unoriginal song name referencing the drug sub culture.
This can go awfully wrong, but you managed to let this sound pretty funny with your little speech in the intro.

The verse is interesting as well with the way you set up your voice with that effect. Also the way you rap fits very well to the background beat, which is always a big plus in hip hop songs, I guess. ^^

So, as a parody, this is a pretty good song.

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Score: 8

"An interesting concept"

by: Coop83

date: November 10, 2009

Deciding to write a rap because you can't sleep. I'm not really sure why you did it like this, as it seems to be nothing to do with the fact that you can't get any sleep, rather is based around the generic layout of a rap track - chauvinistic, slightly coarse and not really giving a damn about what people think.

I think that there's some good sounds there, with the way that the voices have been altered a little and the way that you're almost rapping in close harmony with yourself, giving people a good sounding track that is carried pretty well, by the rest of the melody and beat, which is certainly a plus point of the track.

Personally, I'd have made better lyrics for this track and perhaps had some sort of duet (kind of like Alicia Keys / Jay-Z for their latest track) and take it from there.

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Score: 10

"Shit was awesome."

by: FurryFox

date: November 6, 2009

It felt me all speechless but it was awesome. fav'd!