Score: 9
"Smooth like butta!"
date: October 31, 2009
I like the verses, your flow rides smooth with the beat. I would've liked to hear some faster paced lines though, *variety*. Im diggin your message of unity, I completely agree with that philosophy. I think the chorus could be mastered a bit more; I know you got that Darth Vader breathing problem, so I feel a bit bad knockin you on this, but its fairly evident where you can hear the breaths on the chorus, I give you props for doing it in one take, though. The FX on the chorus is interesting, but Im not too sure they fit in this type of song. Overall: Very Decent track, congrats on the 100 releases, you've made a lot of progress, keep on droppin, when you're at 200 you'll be a juggernaut.
October 31, 2009
Author's Response:
Darth vader line: FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUu
I'll work on making the breathing less noticeable.
There's no FX on my part of the hook. that was mainly part of IGs beat.
Thanks for the review
