Score: 8
"Eirun is a little too harsh on ya."
date: October 28, 2009
You definately got your own sound, which is why I dig your style. I've heard that I sound whiny too, your voice has a more satirical tone then whiny. Now for this song: I like it. Great concept for the story. Really though? Aliens are comin 2021? Im going to hold you to that! If your true, all hail Wyze, re-incarnation of Nostradamus! If you're false, all fail Wyze, re-incarnation of Joseph Smith! As the flow goes: tight, but a few of the words at the end of the bars sound rushed, weakening the clarity of the words. I don't want to assume what you're saying, I want to know.
Overall: Great preview, but for the final product I'd suggest working on making those words clear as a Rocky Mountain natural spring with a nude forest sprite bathing in it. "Fap" to that, then make this track blast!
October 28, 2009
Author's Response:
LMAO! No worries man, the final version of this track will be clear as fuck. Thanks for the thoughts
