you need new speakers.
You should invest in some good speakers. Your mix needs releveling. bass down, kick up.
Author Comments
Another song from me for your enjoyment :)
I spent quite long on this one so please, give it a fair vote :)
And if you dislike it in anyway then zero bomb it, come on - tell me why, I need your feedback to improve :) and I will respond to every review
I really hope you enjoy the song.
Cheers.
Looped evermore
I had this looping for 20 mins while I was doing other things and it didn't bother me, I was subconsciously bopping my head in fact before I realised. That's the sign of a good song. It's short but it has lastability, and loops well. Good job on this!
Liam3003 responds:
Glad you liked it :)
It's one of my personal favorites :)
love it
plenty of substance to it. i hate empty trance music.
Like haggard mentioned, its generic...
...But still, its quite good. U put in a decent background and melody even though the instruments u used can be found ready on Fl Studio and can be heard in several songs around NG.
However, you put in good blend and there was a good drive towards the end. There were very little climaxes and you could've put in some more work on a heavier beat and a less repetitive background.
Overall, its a decent piece and well thought out. Not a bad effort, keep it up!
Darklight17
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Liam3003 responds:
Unless everyone who owns FL studio is using z3ta+, my sounds used here are not FL studio ready sounds. Although, I guess it's impossible to have original sounds.
Thanks for the review.
A little repetitve, but good drive
I think that this track can get very repetitive rather quickly and as a result, you get the urge to stop listening to it. Please take steps to combat this, by adding more variation, taking the track away from this standard beat and standard melody.
I think that there is certainly potential here, even with things like the vocal sample. Additional samples would really help the case, as would the introduction in changes of pace, tune, instruments and the like.
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Liam3003 responds:
Variation seems to be my main problem with my songs, I'm not a pro with Fruity Loops but I would say that I have definitely improved vastly within the past coming months. I'm glad you have taken the time to review this and I will be very sure to try adding in more variation in my songs.
Cheers.
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