Score: 9
"Pretty"
date: November 12, 2009
It's pretty. Nicely played. And well... nice.
I was all ranking up for an awesomly powerful song in the beginning, with that nice deep roll and the backing strings that went on for a short while.
And then you played a lovely tribute to Kingdom Hearts. As a motif in a movie, or game, this would be lovely to hear. And as I have never played Kingdom hearts, this does not effect me so much. Nevertheless, it has a quiet way of taking you somewhere. Though not emotionally, too peaceful for that.
It is a lovely song. But sadly, it isn't exactly memorable. It leaves you with a nice feeling inside, but really doesn't seem to do much else.
Can we hear something that you've composed yourself, something powerful? Something I can really sit back in awe and listen to. Because practically all your songs to date are very much like this one. They've just steadily improved.
It's time to branch out man. Move on, you're sticking yourself in a rut. Running in circles on the same ol' same ol'. Step outside the box. Outside your comfort zone. Start something that makes you quiver with fear because you'll surely never finish. Impossible odds are the best odds. Because when you beat them, you've learned so much as an artist.
Move on Jabicho. Tell us a story you've never told before. Never dared to tell.
Come on. I dare you to try the impossible.
Krayon
December 10, 2009
Author's Response:
Hi krayon! I always love reading your reviews they help me grow a lot =) wow man, sorry for the late response, haven't been on for a while checking my submissions :P thanks so much for saying they've improved.
I'm working hard on a piece for christmas, I just found a day ago a tune that touches deep into one's emotions while it's played so i'm gonna work hard on it till christmas comes, i feel it's kind of different from my zone, so i'll put all my effort, i think this new one is more touching than relaxing, lol all my pieces have a relaxing feeling don't they? =P maybe the little time left will be good or bad, but it will be a challenge.
I want to try different styles, some hard chaotic tunes, happy/funny, strong, etc. I know it'll be hard, but you said it, impossible odds are the best! don't forget to check my content in christmas! I'm giving it all, and feel i'm growing as an artist too =) you'll see, i'll make it big!
Thanks so much for your support, as always, it's a pleasure to read your comments =) take care my friend!
