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Uploaded
Oct 20, 2009 | 7:45 PM EDT
File Info
Song
2.8 MB
1 min 43 sec
Score
3.36 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.36 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
521 Plays | 33 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Techno
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Author Comments

A bright light in the distance.
3rd song, i think im getting a bit better
listen, rate and comment, any advice is appreciated

Reviews


Stickman91Stickman91

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad...

It isn't the greatest thing I've ever heard, but it's pretty nice. The melody is kinda catchy. :)

I'm not an experienced musician, but I'll try to give you some advice.

One thing about this song that bothered me were the sporadic bursts of sound you threw in there. For example, the one that comes in at 1:13 is kind of odd and doesn't seem to fit in with the rest of the song. If you want to add in a sound like that, you might want to try "controlling" it a bit more. Try to make it flow with the song, and make sure it doesn't drown out other parts of the song.

Also, some of the sounds you used ended kind of abruptly, in my opinion. For example, the sounds that come in at 1:23 and 1:27 end kind of strangely. They would've been more satisfying to listen to if they had faded out a bit.

Keep in mind that I'm just one person though, and I'm only letting you know what I thought. Someone else may enjoy the somewhat sporadic/abrupt style used in this song.

Anyway, good job, and good luck with making music in the future!


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DJ-Evoker responds:

Thanks for the advice!
I'm not sure if im gonna change this one, but it helps for future songs


mario91234mario91234

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hot

I liked the first half and saw where you were going w/ the 2nd. I LOVE the transition sound at 0:18s~19s. Good beat and catchy. Good start!


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DJ-Evoker responds:

thanks man :)