Score: 10

"A bit better!"

by: behemothfan

date: October 26, 2009

I liked this more than the first one. Just longer with more stuff. Overall, good. I hope chompie likes it.

Score: 5

"its ok"

by: butt-munch46

date: October 19, 2009

its ok, i mean its not repetitiv or any thing but it just boring. nice try tho. keep praticing

Score: 6

"You probably already know this..."

by: Maltloaf

date: October 19, 2009

The melody/writing's fine, but the samples consistency kills it - the pizz @ ~1 minute in and the drums most notably.

On the headphones comment - if it doesn't sound right on both headphones and speakers then somethings wrong. Most of my work's midi, but even so the rule is to listen to your tracks on at least a couple of sets of gear - you'll notice issues on one that another masks - and keep tweaking it 'til it's right on everything you've got to hand. :)

<-- Is an arse, but means well. :)