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11:32 total run time, this is part one.

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Average Score: 9.3 / 10

Score: 10

"wow!"

by: deathcross

date: October 29, 2009

no wonder it was on the featured list... this is SO awsome! oh and btw, i was vote number 200! i just never did have the time to review... awsome song!

most i can say about it is... is... god damn, nothing at all.

10/10 5/5

October 30, 2009

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Jolly good.

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Score: 10

"It...Must Be Done."

by: tommy-boy208

date: October 27, 2009

Very creative song, but I would have liked to hear a bit more of that cyborg voice (or whatever it was) because it was awesome, and it almost added a whole story to the song. The choice of words for that segment at (2:10) was awesome, and the execution was spot-on.

(unless it speaks more in part 2, which I'm on my way to check out now)

October 28, 2009

Author's Response:

Theres a vocal synth, so it kind of counts.

"It must be done." Is me, stretched, filtered, phased, bit crushed, cropped and shifted around, normalized, steroized, reverbed and many of the effects (primarily stretch and bit crush) automated for a specific creation of an inhuman tone.

It would be a trick in itself to make a voice like that in lyrics.

Which I just so happen to be doing with Gravey in a collab.

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Score: 5

"eh...potential?"

by: lidlurch

date: October 27, 2009

I really can't decide what to say about this song because this song can't decide what it's supposed to be about! Your beats are pretty incredible, but you really need to decide on one beat! make a form to the music as well :P. As of right now, it's just a three note chord progression being played over and over and over and over and over and over in different ways! make some sort of refrain, bridge, intro, and conclusion. It's a cool idea, but it really doesn't go anywhere. the only thing that does go anywhere is the beat, which really doesn't make an entire song. My advice to you is to totally redo this song....but that's just me. From my point of view it's like 15 different forms of the same basic idea..pick one and build off of it.

November 9, 2009

Author's Response:

Not to be antagonistic, but the idea of doing an overhaul of a song thats 12 minutes in length is absurd. You can be the sole indiviudal who is given acess to the file if you'd like to crap a brick and experience a change of mind.

Up to the 1:50 mark it is the same riff, after that things start getting mixed up and are not the same 3 chords.

Unfortunately a chart comparing complexity VS popularity displays a negative trend.

Its funny what one can conclude about such trends.

Editing my response for clarity, my last comment there is suggesting a lack of complexity on your part. Yes this is mildly inflammatory.