To the two assholes below me: fuck you. Song definitely needs improvement here and there I'll give you that but no need to give lower than 5 at this point, seeing that this song is over 5 years old and you have improved a lot now. 5 for you my friend, rock on!

Well...

He's got a point, it's not as good as your other stuff, my friend, sorry. But that means I should offer some possibly helpful advice, then.

The guitar tone is simple as usual... Heavy still, but the lead is what is throwing me off big-time. The lead doesn't quite seem distorted enough, and the the arpeggios coinciding don't quite fit the method of the progression of the chords as well as I'd like to see. Not too mention, they seem to be a bit stuggled.

The drums are a bit too different to be applied here, they seem to have some odd sort of aborigine sound to them, which some bands may somehow attempt to work. But maybe just not here.

The ending also loops badly, and, really that's my worst. Painful? I hope to think not.

I really did like the main riff on the rythm guitar though, I must salvage that though.

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This was not good at all...