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This is just a preview of a song I'm making. It is VERY unfinished, not even a speck close, but I don't want to completely get done with the song, and have it be horrible, so I want you, Newgroundians (is that right? If that's not the word for people on here it should be.) to tell me how it is.
Please voice your opinions.

I'm aware these things sound quite crappy quality, I've got to wait to buy an actually nice song maker like Cubase, along with a new keyboard.
so I used Finale Notepad or what ever that silly thing is. :)

Like I said, Please voice your opinions, I want to know what I can change, what I can add.