Score: 7
"lol, I saw the title."
date: November 7, 2009
I made a song like a year and a half ago called "the rise." so when I saw yours I thought I might give it a listen.
not bad. you definitely have a firm grip on the fundamentals of making a song.
Some things you may want to work on:
*clipping: I could hear a bit of it in the beginning, but it wasn't terrible. might need to just add a limiter on your song.
* repetitiveness: again, not too shabby. I've heard far worse, believe me. ;)
* melody: this was the thing that held you most back. Although the song has great flow to it, and your eqing was pretty decent, the melody itself just wasn't emotionally pulling enough. Try to experiment with different notes until you get a decent progression going.
Overall, nice work! I can see that you put a lot of effort into this, and such is the music creation process. Just work on the things I listed, you will be sure to improve.
4/5 7/10
November 8, 2009
Author's Response:
Still going. Thank you very much for the review. :)
