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Better Off Alone - Alice Deejay
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So this is a track that Typhlanar and I made a few months ago. We sort of gave up on it mainly because we couldn't find the vocal track from the original song. But, I looked back on the project recently and built it up from nearly nothing, adding an intro, outro, breakdown and loads of synths and effects. Hope you guys enjoy this track. Please, feel free to comment and vote and let us know if you'd want to work on this track further.

Also, check out Typh's music page: http://typhlanar.newgroun ds.com/ (remove spaces)
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Average Score: 9.0 / 10

Score: 10

"Nice man!!!"

by: LK412

date: October 13, 2009

Love it dude!!

Perfect, like for srs.

Love the heavy beat, :D

5/5 10/10

November 12, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review man :)

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Score: 9

"Great! :)"

by: Ethalyn

date: October 6, 2009

Very good, i like the melo and the progression.

Although i would work on thumping the song up a beat, its very sloppy and loose atm! ;)

EQ every instrument to make it flow better, and the beef that kick/bass action up by paying close attention to both instruments :)

Nice hihat lines though, well done! :)

0/10
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Keep it up! ;)

-JC

October 8, 2009

Author's Response:

0/10 :O lol I know it's 9 :P haha thanks for the review man :)

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Score: 8

"good intro"

by: durn

date: October 5, 2009

I like how it starts, the intro leads up well and progresses as it should. However, it doesn't really take me anywhere unexpected. Kinda predictable how it drops.

however, I love the bassline you bring in about 3 minutes in. totally shoulda started to showcase that earlier with lil blips/bits of it thrown in building up to its drop as 3 minutes in seems a little late to be dropping the part that makes the song unique from its original.

maybe start to drop the new bassline in around 1 minute in or so to show that the song's building to be unique.

October 5, 2009

Author's Response:

I know what you mean. I only threw in that bassline in the end because it was the only way to get something to fill the song up, at the time. Glad you liked it man. Thanks alot for the review. Again, I'll probably look over the track again using things you told me.