Score: 6
"Trying for too much."
date: October 28, 2009
The begining is good. It sets the song up to be epic. But then it didnt pick up again until 0:53 with the strings which made it ok. However, I got chills at 1:17 from the piano part, well done indeed.
The vocals were a good touch too, but go a bit on the high side.
I think my favorite part started at 3:01 when there are all the elments at once. Maybe I just prefer that kind of chaos.
I don't approve of the parts where its just the bass beat and piano. It seems as though they are fighting each other, like the beat player is over-enthusiastic and the piano player isnt always sure what he's playing.
Anyway, although your song has some really good parts, I dont feel like they really fit together. I think trying to put in all of the affects hurt more than it helped. (I know I said I liked chaos but I mean more consistent chaos. lol)
Your overall song is good and I hope to hear and improoved version soon.
October 29, 2009
Author's Response:
i dont think ill be improving it sorry
