Score: 8
"Underrated Beyond Belief"
date: October 12, 2009
I hate rap. I hate it a lot. Most of it is just plain crap to me, and lots of others here. However, this takes TALENT. That flow was crazy. I dont see the reason for all the cursing, but hell it does give it a sort of flow. That background beat was crazy! I found myself listening to this over and over again. I came back for more at least 6 times. I showed my other friend who hates rap, and he loves it as well. Ive heard lots of rap and even made fun of it with my own nerdy rap song. This, however, has something different. Is it the amazing vocal talent... or is it the lyrics? I dont know. All i know is this was a nice listen.
TIPS
Cut back on the cursing. No need to say pussy fuck shit cock or n****r over and over again. You can just wriute poetic lyrics and rap them.
Make a more variety in the background beat. Put in some synths. It doesnt have to be all beats and bass. You should put in some synth to make it not 100% rap, but a REALLY COOL FLOW SONG. Like a techno song but with lyrics that flow.
Good luck, dont mind the haters. Many just hate rap. Good job getting to top 5 hehe.
October 14, 2009
Author's Response:
i feel you on that bruddah, but you gotta remember we havnt got the resources to spread reach out to other markets, so we gotta make the music that the market closet to use wants to hear, you feel me, plus with the cursing these guys only write the way they speak, we cant help it plus this music aint really for kids or the faint hearted, but bless for the love dawg, yea i understand these haters, that why i dont respond coz instead of just closing the site, they wanna listen to a genre they already dontlike and just complain, tell em to go out and find a girl haha, peace.
