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Uploaded
Oct 1, 2009 | 12:16 AM EDT
File Info
Song
5.7 MB
4 min 9 sec
Score
3.92 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.92 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
594 Plays | 43 Downloads
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Genres:
Hip Hop, Rap, R&B - Hip Hop - Modern
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Author Comments

Lol i was bored. so i made a stupid song in 20 minutes. beat by kid crisis.

Lyrics:

Verse 1

I used to rule the world
Actually I still do
You a stain in the game
they call you mildew
Im a real dood
you a fake boss
no stacks no money
you a fake ross
and i walk on water while you a paraplegic
already made my move, steps ahead, very strategic
imma do me like rocko or kobe unstoppable
hung like a horse nick named the live stock show
im in charge
days off on the weekends
im in charge
of the strongside you the weak end
see when we send
bombs on these tracks man
its suicide
i stay armed like an afghan
annnd my flow is high like the andes
dont believe me ill give you the middle phalanges
uhhhh you can bet your little fannies
that ill school you put you in your place super nanny

Verse 2

I shut it down imma make this city black out
Heavy flow try and carry it and throw your back out
cus my flow keep hoes addicted like a crack house
i am better then you and i know that youll ask how
cash now and ill tell you the answer later
maybe you should stop ahead and do yourself a favor
cus my impact on this game is the size of a crater
i shock and awe you can call me a taser
thats how i do it you should learn and listen
or listen and learn it makes no difference
rock hard, dont need viagra to make it stiffen
ill kill you germs, febreeze, take a whiff and
exhale slowly cus i know ill leave you breathless
only on the second verse you should see my set list
but i can change it up like a shot thats contested
worth more then the stocks you invest in
not my fault i chew the game up cus i spit fire
but it is my fault that i put yall lames to shame
honestly upon us be the lyrical messiah
battle me in anything get beat you name the game

and a whole bunch of random shit after that

Reviews


MickeyMaoMickeyMao

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Decent

Good:
-several clever lines and multi-syllable rhymes
-the ad libs in the background add some character
-you got appropiate tone of voice to suit the beat
-Props to Kid Crisis on the beat
-I like the ending.

Needs Work:
-Overdubbing every rhyming couplet really make this sound very novel (also the echo on them is too much).The dubs are too structured, it sounds fake and it distracts from the words that follow.
- At points your flow was choppy, particularly in the 2nd verse.
-Amp up the volume on the main vocal track.

Overall: For 20 minutes of work, its fairly decent. Keep at it.



melymelsmithmelymelsmith

Rated 5 / 5 stars

I really like this!

I love the alternative rock/urban mix to this and your rhymes are clever ("phalanges" HA!)! Keep up the artistry my condo ownin' brotha! Hint...


Impoverty responds:

i like milfs.


KlazikNadiKlazikNadi

Rated 4 / 5 stars

4.20 / 5.00 (+ 0.15)

Pretty good. Im gonna agree with KidCris. I think this track has alot more potential with a little more work. Oh yea, lyrics were well written. Keep it up!


Impoverty responds:

fasho thanks for the input!


KidCrisisKidCrisis

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

nice

I think you should have spent more time on it.

But hey it was straight


Impoverty responds:

fasho. but im not gonna spend too much time on any songs till i get a better mic.