Not to Shabby
The drum loop/pattern needs to be quantized and you need to compress some of your sounds because it is drowning out your set and your getting a lot of clippings/static. A little to much shuffle at parts. Don't be afraid to break of from the 2 step beat too. Sounds like you would be a better trance music producer. tone down and EQ throughout especially around 3:10-3:15, your transitions synths are way to loud. The lead that kind of sounds like a pendulum riff needs to be more focal (turn down the saw.) try using some ghost notes on your snares, layer your set, and use more variation in you hit hat patterns.
I liked the lively trance bass, DnB basses get boring sometimes. Would have been cool if you bit crushed the bass and took of the portamento to get a Spor'ish shuffle rhythm synth going. I'm glad you took the time to step out of the comfort zone and put this out there. Learning new music genres only make you better. Keep up the good work, I bet the next one will be twice as good.
5'd and D'd