Epic
too short :(

I wonder...

why these good songs get zero bombed...

This is a good song by the way.

here are some things you should keep in mind though
some parts near the end, its get "busy".
try not to introduced too much harmonies.
it doesn't sound too good when too much things are going on. It can also add dissonance meaning, notes that don't sound good played together.
Drums were really great. Loved the snare drum style break in the song.
Also like the way the bassdrum is used in the beginning.

My Suggestion: Try adding more bass or a louder bassline. I like bass :D

In all, this song doesn't deserve a lousy 2.41
more like a 4.30 or 4.50

This is sounds like it could be a hit.
good luck on EP
Hope you make it!

I gave it a 5
YOU SHOULD TOO!

~Joseph F.

Congrats

Hey, Grats on getting in on the EP! Didn't work so well on MY first try either :P