Cool...

The intro is a bit hard to follow. but once this gets going it sounds pretty cool. I do like how you introduce new layers and build it up slowly over time. Despite that though, this repeats way too much. So I would work on the structure first and foremost by adding new sections that are different melodically from the one you have here.

As for the instruments themselves, you did well creating an ensemble that has a cool and unique sound. Every instrument really feeds off of the rest of the ensemble, which makes for a real cohesive sound. And the mix you created with them is pretty well done in my opinion. At least on my speakers nothing sticks out or gets buried in the mix.

I do like the main melody you wrote. It sounds pretty cool, but you need to expand it a bit. Variety is the main thing lacking in this song. You need to take this idea and expand it into new thoughts and paths for the music to follow. You could even introduce new instruments if you wanted. But at the least you need to create new melodies and harmonies to keep this interesting.

4/5 and 7/10 overall. Nice work here.

-Gravey-

I like it

It's realy hard to say what genre is it, but I lie it :D