Nice, but rough around the edges

Hey.

Needs more bass, and the echo effects tends to hide the fact that there isn't much clarity in the chords. The hi-hat is too loud and aggressive. At the bridge section 0:29 - 0:40, it really should have brought out the chords more, and I noticed where you did the pitch bend at 0:36-0:37... that didn't sound too good. At the end, it stops, and these some 30 seconds of silence.

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- Ziro out.

A bit screechy, but still good.

The echo effect kind of takes too much of the melody.

And why does it have a much longer play time, there's a 30 second pause at the end.