Score: 7

"Final Results for Voice ACting Contest :U"

by: FatKidWitAJetPak

date: November 1, 2009

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 71

First off, this is my second favorite so far out of all the entries, and i have seen almost all of them. I thought it was so funny and cute and the way you purposely sounded like a girl trying to sound like a guy narrator made me laugh. They main thing that you need to work on is the acting. I could tell you were having fun with this lol, so you trailed off and kind of lost the acting in teh characters, They sounded more silly and random than good acting characters. but there were tons of very well done lines that got you some major points. Your a good voice actor when it comes to these cute characters, but you should try to get as INTO the character as possible. I liked the range you had, all of them sounded squeaky and cute but you still managed to make them sound different. I LOVED THE STORY!!! Attack by food? BRILLIANT! Its like that powerpuff girls episode haahah. -86

EDDACHE SAYS:

Jessismith
Jones Family

Acting = 30
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 10
Mixing = 7

- 82

Comments
This was very well acted with lots of very entertaining characters. The narrator's voice was a bit weak, and there seemed to be a bit of a struggle with Butch's voice. However, the overall piece has whole a lot of charm! The music/sfx was a little loud in places, swamping the characters voices and there were a few pauses which slowed the piece done. But it was well acted and I hope to hear more from this super family!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones Family VA Contest Entry
Acting 18/35
Fit 15/25
Originality 12/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 6/10

- 58

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones family VA contest entry
Acting - 14/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

- 60

The cutest performance I have ever heard. However some voices seemed a little forced but overall very funny!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Score: 8

"Some advice :D"

by: Stalagmite

date: October 13, 2009

your script was very creative, and made me very hungry! it had a ditsy cute feel that could only be given by you! :D a really wonderful feeling of being there was the result of your mixing! where admitedly your performance was a little to quiet at parts, and your low narrator/man voice did sound really forced and unnatural, and assumedly especially uncomfortable to perform! hehe, so it jus shows how hard you where trying! :D your range was impressive as usual, and the general acting performance was quite good :D
only you could pull off a convincing battle between random cute characters VS the vegetable crusade. KEEP IT UP! i loved the grandma voice. well done, thanks so much for submitting! and you are pure awesome :D

Score: 10

"Gee..."

by: gintasdx

date: October 4, 2009

Sweet dude! Now I know that you really easy can make boyish voice *freaky*.

Score: 10

"Aye boyo"

by: Westies

date: September 28, 2009

Damn, you gotta lotta talent.

Score: 10

"The Jones Family bring the smiles again..."

by: rednikaiaG

date: September 27, 2009

I love hearing you "do" the Jones Family, Jessi------>
Old Gramma is confused as always! Angel is as cute as ever. Mom's there to deal with the lot of them and Butch is feeding "his" ego again, I see. These guys are all so cute! Oh yeah and I LOVED all the references for those of us, who recognize them (Pie, Cucumbers, Bananas, Muffins and of course, Cheese). I couldn't think of a more perfect song to play, when they start flying, than "Peril". It was PERFECT!
I wish you the best of luck on the VA Contest, LadyBug! It's SO good to hear another female competitor. You got quite a handful of characters, too. :) Well, I hope everything's been good with you and yours. Maybe we can catch up sometime on LeSkype. I see you on all the time but I never know if it's alright to say something. I just don't want to bug ya. *hugs*
Hope to hear from you soon, Woman. Until then. . .

..............Take care, be good and eat Muffins.period
<3 :( Gaia :)