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The prog rock song with vocals, lol.

I'm a horrible singer methinks D:

Guilt showers you
On a fateful tide
Sleeping on a twisted stream
Inside a waterfall

He's pacing around to stop from sinking
Beneath
His home

And I'll sing for love
And I'll love for life

Sleep now my love!
Aren't I the first you would lie for?

Ooooooooh

Stop the stream
Erect the dam

Stop yourselves
End the flow
No water
Shall get through
Five dozen
Men will lose
So fifteen
Shall die alone

Inhale the solar rays
Embrace the fiery wisdom

Take in all that you can
Absorb every sliver, every ghost
He held a fear of lying beneath the sky
A phobia of feeling a little dry

Breathe me into you
Conquer the shame of sealing your thoughts
Brace yourself for a pact of lies in a dam

Proceed with the slaughter of chance
Brave any road toward a fiendish desire

Liar, liar

The season to cry
The moment he died
They suggest he try
Found answers to why
And I try

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Average Score: 9.5 / 10

Score: 9

"It's a really good song."

by: thecoreman

date: October 31, 2009

Very nice tiny solo at 1:04, I liked it a whole lot. Double vocals at parts were awesome, but you overused them sometimes. If I had to describe it, then this would be a mix between light mathcore and steve-vie-ish sound, both of them are my favorites. Great job.

I think that you should have made the ending much more powerful. It felt like you were giving up while you sing "I try". Kinda wrecked it for me (that's the reason it's a 9 and not a 10).

Also, a small tip - you're a Countertenor (mezzo-soprano), and you sound so much better there. Don't try to sing at a tenor voice, you hit all the notes but it sounds lifeless. At the Mezzo-Soprano, you don't hit the notes, you SING them. Just my opinion.

November 1, 2009

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I know nothing about the voice and shouldn't be singing if I don't know how. I've just started trying to learn, and I've got a lot to work to do.

Thanks for the tips!

Also, that B at the end is way outta my range, I think you're dead right when I shouldn't try to sing in that area.

Thanks again!

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Score: 10

"Nice"

by: Nosferatu-of-Worms

date: October 6, 2009

I just came by your page to see what was new and came across this, very nice. I actually think you're a pretty decent vocalist (but this is coming from someone who's far worst lol).

Also, the music is just a tad bit too quiet, but your mixing skills have definitely improved a lot (everything seems at proper levels and well meshed together). As for the overall composition, as always I enjoy it. The constant changes due to it being progressive help it keep from being boring and the guitar playing is amazing as always.

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Score: 9

"Nice track!"

by: MetallyUnstable

date: September 27, 2009

Good one, I really enjoyed this.

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Score: 10

"Nice!"

by: Metaljonus

date: September 24, 2009

I love it man! But! the vocals seem to drown out some of the background music. Maybe bring the music up a little to even it out with the volume of the vox? I dunno great track. Check out my newest track NRS

<3
-Jon

September 24, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks MJ! I'm a compressor noob :3

I'll play with the mix more!

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Score: 9

"Hey dude"

by: Wahnsinn

date: September 24, 2009

Sorry I didn't lay vocals on this earlier. Been busy, but dude your voice kicks ass, and fits the song better than mine would probably. This song rules dude. 5/5 10/10 dl'd and fav'd. You're fuckin' awesome for a 17 year old dude, I know you're planning on it but keep it up :D

September 24, 2009

Author's Response:

Oh, thanks!

Oh it's alright, I just happened to get a vocal track on it anyway. I'd still love to hear your voice on it, but if you don't feel like it, it's all cool! Glad you enjoy the track!