There is Static in My Blood

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Date Submitted

09/21/2009 | 12:14PM EDT

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Industrial Song | 5.6 MB | 4 min 52 sec

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4.09 / 5.00

Score Rank: #46,316
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Author Comments

It's true I've been betrayed before,
But this feeling is foreign when it comes from you,
I never thought it could end this way,
If I kept my word, then I'd regret it now.

I'm no stranger to finding knives in my back,
But this blood's a bit different; there's something inside,
Tastes like poison passing through my teeth,
There is static running through my blood.

You scream "please stop" but I can't hear,
You've done so much, that all that's there,
Is the static in my blood that overwhelms my ear,
So beg for me to stop the way you begged me to stay.

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Average Score: 9.1 / 10

Score: 7
Darklight17

"Not bad..."

date: October 25, 2009

Well, i liked the otehr one better for sure. This one was bit too rough for my tastes. The screeching really didn't help.

Beat was qutie good and fast though, so that got ur pts up a bit. Who's the screeching guy btw? He sounds mentally demented...

Intro was good, transitioning quite well into the main melody which did tend to get a bit repetitive.

Still, u deserve this seven and i think taht if u work more on this it'd do really well.

Darklight17
-Review Request Club-

October 25, 2009

Author's Response:

The screeching guy was a stock sample from Reason 4.0.

What part do you refer to when you say "main melody"?

Thanks for the review!

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Score: 7
Haggard

"Good beats"

date: October 24, 2009

The beats are very nice and sound indeed very industrial like. They are hard and "uncompromising". There are also some very strange things going on in this song, which makes it interesting to listen to. But I think some of the effects are overdone. Especially that one we can hear at 1:04 for the first time. It gets really annoying towards the end, so maybe you can cut down on it's use a little bit.

Also, during the middle of the song it gets a bit weaker, where it has a quite slow and calm part (2:44 - 3:40). There's not too much happening during that minute, so it gets a bit boring there.

Luckily after that the song picks up again and we can hear those nice beats again and a nice melody.

So, overall this is a good song, but it still needs some more work.

{ Review Request Club }

October 25, 2009

Author's Response:

I politely disagree? =]

I think maybe this just isn't your style of music. All the criticism you had against it were mine, and others, favorite traits of the song. I'm not saying you're wrong, just saying that I think your review was more opinionated than critical. Sure the vocal sample was annoying to you, but everyone else seems to love it as well as me, so to say that I can cut down on it is a little counter-productive, don't you think?

I'm being very careful not to offend you here, so excuse me if I do. I'm not trying to sound rude or anything, I really appreciate the review and the second opinions, but when you're stating your opinion state it as an opinion rather than blatantly telling me certain things need to be changed that maybe only do to you.

I really liked the slower part of the song and the way it built back up, and I think you failed to realize that the vocal sample I introduced at 1:04 was a lead sound as an alternative to a synth lead (though that does come in at the final verse). There was a lot of variation in the way way I used the sample and if it's annoying to you, that's totally cool. I'm not exactly trying to make music EVERYONE enjoys, I'm just trying to express myself in a way that I hope other people can relate to. If you don't, I totally respect that.

I think you'll find I'm very appreciative of reviews yet territorial of my work. I'm not someone who makes music based off of trial and error and requires other people to tell me what sounds good and what doesn't. Truth is, I know what sound I want and if it doesn't sound that way, I'm not going to keep it that way. So to look at the biggest characteristics of a song that I put my heart into and say that it's overdone so factually, I take a little bit of offense to it.

I don't want to keep you from reviewing my work, just telling you the way I view my material so that you can respond accordingly. Obviously I can't expect you to know how I feel about what I do when I've never talked to you before, so that's what this response is.

By now I'm just blabbing, so I'll just say: sorry if I came across as making you feel like your review was worthless, because it's totally not true! Every opinion is listened to and considered, including yours, but in the end I have to express myself for myself, not to please others. As Angerfist says "I write my music for me, I don't write my music to entertain people. I write my music because... I am my music!"

Come back and visit soon,

PizzaBox.

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Score: 10
Fro

"~ Review Request Club ~"

by: Fro
date: October 24, 2009

That was really sweet!

There seemed to be so many different genres in here. I almost heard some heavy metal or at least some rock along with some glitch style. It was really sweet and had a lot of variety in it!

The vocals were awesome and really timed well/used well throughout the entire submission. To me personally I don't have anything to critique the song on and I think it's one of my favorites on the site!

~ Review Request Club ~

October 25, 2009

Author's Response:

Holy crap, thanks o.o

I wish everyone thought that highly of mewsik.

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Score: 9
Coop83

"Good Industrial Beats"

by: Coop83
date: October 23, 2009

I love the way that this piece incorporates all aspects of the industrial genre, taking it to some pretty nice sounding places. I can definitely hear and feel the factory atmosphere within the latter stages of this tune, which gives it a very good feel as the rest of the instruments come in to compliment the piece as a whole.

I'd have given a break for the beat towards the middle, to bring back the calm that seems to really add body to the tune. Perhaps different to how you did it, as this semi-beat, coupled with the "Maybe you shouldn't be here" sounds a little quiet and it requires something of a backing melody to it - perhaps strings was what I was thinking.

[Review Request Club]

October 23, 2009

Author's Response:

"I'd have given a break for the beat towards the middle, to bring back the calm that seems to really add body to the tune."

Love it. Will do.

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Score: 9
ChaosDragon004

"Alot of hot sounds in this!"

date: October 19, 2009

Also, the voice mix was cool stuff. Good blend on that as well. This is different music all the way around. Im really feeling your style. You might wanna think about DJ'n for a club.

October 19, 2009

Author's Response:

You like the adjective "hot" don't you? haha.

Thanks for compliments, but I'm terrified of crowds. So I don't think DJing is in my future =]

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