Remember meee??
Writing as I'm listening to it.
You need to get rid of that saw, it doesn't go with that funky drum beat.
I would of liked to hear the :55 without the saw, just to see how interesting it is.
The piano is pretty decent here, I'm diggin' it.
I think the piano here goes alright with the saw, but it's getting really repetitive.
Where's the bass at?
The saw and the pad ambient part goes pretty decently.
Alright, diggin' 3:10, although you should of added an interesting transition, it just happens.
Piano/pad again, I've heard this before.
Overall the song is really repetitive. You reuse lots of parts without making them more interesting in any way. No real transitions and the same sounds throughout the song. Now that you have a decent grasp on making a song, it's time to play with effects and get used to using some decent vsts.
Keep goin' man, I wanna hear more from you! :p
Porkmorphic 
