Fall

Cayler

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Cayler

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Date Submitted

09/19/2009 | 03:01PM EDT

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Pop Song | 5.8 MB | 4 min 12 sec

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3.99 / 5.00

Score Rank: #51,068
Popularity Rank: #3,204

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Author Comments

I decided that even if I lose some exclusive rights to my original songs by posting them on NG, I can always just write more better songs, and the ultimate point is just to let people hear the music. I decided to post new material again! But still feel free to check me out on iTunes, search for 'Caleb Harvey' as that is my real name. :)
I hope that all those of you who enjoyed the first version of Fall will really enjoy this updated and more professional sounding version!

LYRICS
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Every mother, every father, every daughter and son,
Everybody falls once, before falling once again.
Everybody who loves somebody, everybody falls hard
Like every rain drop falls.
Every shooting star falls somewhere
Before a wish comes true.
Every shooting star falls somewhere,
A shooting star just like you.
When you feel the weightlessness of falling down,
Don't give up, just turn around.
Look upon the faces of friends and take their hands.
With all the strength inside you there's no doubt you'll make it to the end.
If you find a shooting star, please show it to me.
All I ever wanted was to believe
That anybody can help somebody,
And somebody can help me.
When the sun falls down on the horizon,
That's when the moon appears and makes everything glow.
And if the rain didn't fall,
The plants would never grow.
And if the sun didn't fall,
The moon would never show.
So if you find that shooting star,
Let me know where you are.
I just want to believe it's true,
Cause I already believe in you.

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Average Score: 9.7 / 10

Score: 10
DJOrsa

"Amazing!"

by: DJOrsa
date: November 11, 2009

I don't hear music on NG with vox, and this is just amazing..
Great voice man, what voice VSTs do you use? I can sing decently, but I never knew how to add good effects and stufff. Also, what mic are you using?

Only suggestion, your voice is really drowning out the drums for a lot of parts. Your voice is really good, so it's not bad, but maybe your should mix your drums a tad higher and then turn up the volume on your vox just a tad. :D

Amazing, besides that. :D

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Score: 9
lonegale25

"Its great but still needs improvement"

date: September 30, 2009

How about adding a part where the melody quiets down a bit and someone with a really low voice "raps".

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Score: 8
DundurMifflin

"Entertaining."

date: September 29, 2009

It is by no stretch of the imagination bad. Its actually better than decent. But there are issues with it that keep me from giving it a perfect score.

I feel that the parts that had the quiet "techno-e" backgrounds were the best. If those parts were louder and a larger part of the song, in other words more frequent, than the song would be improved. This would also stop the song from sounding so cliche and melancholy. Also, this would allow the lyrics to stay the way they are without sounding cliche because of the contrast the sound of the music itself creates. I understand that this may be the sound you wanted, that is to say a sad-ish sounding ballad. But I personally think that your voice is suited for more "up-beat poppy" music.

That being said your singing is still very good, and the lyrics, while cliche, are in no way bad. You said that this song is an updated version of an original, but I feel that one more improved version will unlock this song's true potential.

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Score: 9
freeskateboarder

"you are so good"

date: September 29, 2009

ignore the person tath dont like you but change youre lyrics just alittle bit

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Score: 10
Sailskate88

"agree with demare"

date: September 29, 2009

This track actually gave me goosebumps. Loved it, one suggestion I would make with your future stuff is to try to avoid cliche when writing lyrics. Not to take anything away from this song, because as I said it is very very good, but your work will be that much better.

September 29, 2009

Author's Response:

Yes, I loathe cliche, but sometimes it's the only thing I can think that fits. lol :)

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