Score: 3
"My review, your song."
date: September 18, 2009
Write music when its not super late, and your not so tired.
Needs a mix, lacks a bass/accompaniment.
Very center based, this could benefit a ton from some subtle panning.
Melody does not progress, I see its a 1 minute loop, but even then, if half this was another melody, its looping for long periods of time while not becoming so repetitive would be much better.
In the future, spend more time on your songs, and raise yoru quality of work to that of a higher, more complete one.
1/5 3/10
