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Uploaded
Sep 17, 2009 | 6:09 PM EDT
File Info
Song
1.1 MB
59 sec
Score
4.24 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 4.24 / 5 stars
Plays & Downloads:
535 Plays | 40 Downloads
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Genres:
Electronic - Ambient
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Author Comments

Just made this today.. I need to get back into making a few songs a day.

Reviews


InvisibleObserverInvisibleObserver

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

My review, your song.

So I'm picking up a trend of dark in sound (Sad/mysterious/lonely those sort of 'emotions'), minimalistic, short, discordant loops.

You nearly always intro on a pad-like synth, add a simple accompaniment, whether its an additional lead, or bass, that seems 50-50ish.

Often some minimalistic drums come in which will switch on and off about 2-4 times in a minute of song time.

Minute song time seems to be your reigning average length. There are of course exceptions, but of the 15 or so songs I checked out, only 2 were greatly over a minute.

The pixel-grinding sound in here made for a nice contrast.

Most of your songs have very little progression and are just kind of whispy and directionless.

Also you drum tracks tend to be more ambient in nature then percussion that really adds to the song.

I think instead of working on making a song a day, or in one sitting, you should work towards making a longer more coherent piece, and develop a more intricate writing style. Your submissions from nearly 2 years ago don't vary too much from the ones you are submitting now. (Obviously theres been improvement, but in writing style not a ton.)

I do however like your choice of instrumentation quite a lot, the sounds used always fit together, and despite being primarily FL presets, does not stand out as such.

3/5 5/10


LollipopNightmare responds:

Well, it sounds like you know me!
or that you listened to my music. ^.^
so yes, i will take into consideration the fact that i need to stop being so impatient and work on one song over a longer period of time.
Although I like what I can come up with in 30 minutes.. i'm sure it would be a bit more rewarding to have a song that sounds great that others will want to also want to enjoy.
I really need to get better and 'drumming it up'.
my drums suck..... wah.
ltmg

ttyl


aloneagainfriendaloneagainfriend

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Great work

NICE STUFF!
check my new one out... you may like it.


LollipopNightmare responds:

I think i like everything you do!

ARRRRR!!!

Shiver me Timbers baby.

lmao

MOAR COMMENTS!!!!! hehehe