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Sep 17, 2009 | 12:59 AM EDT
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2.3 MB
1 min 6 sec
3.89 / 5.00

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Rated 3.89 / 5 stars
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492 Plays | 34 Downloads
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Author Comments

This is a project I'm currently working on. It's a simple sort of rockish track, but I'm sort of at an impass as to where to go next with it.

I like how it's progressed so far, but I feel it could use something, just not sure what.

Any constructive criticisms, or suggestions will be well recieved.

Thanks, and enjoy.



Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Yeah ummm...

I would like to suggest not using so many synths or keys, but maybe I am just biased. The dynamics were there. I liked the phrase you used in the beginning, that was pretty sweet.

The next thing I would do in this piece if I were writing it would be to change the key, and move to a different phrase, then come back the original one, do some more original jamming with it, then double chorus out.

Good job!


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Alturos responds:

That's actually a pretty good idea. I've been struggling with what to do with it for a while now. A key change is probably a great place to start.

Thanks for the review!