Notbad

And this was notbad I like the build up but it was a very slow build up and wouldn't mind you having a faster build up because that was rather slow but anyways this could be much longer to and you could ad all sorts of sounds in there as well some unique sounds and different instraments would be cool too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some different instraments and speed up the build up

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For a first track, this is quite an achievement! I'm not sure I like the dialing sound that kicks in toward the end, it's a bit too loud and squeaky somehow, but apart from that it's a nice tune. The beat sounds like real drumming and the waves are nice and grungy. Keep it up!

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better than 70s loop

nice starting song. good luck