Score: 5
"Good try dudes"
date: November 15, 2009
Started off great man. The intro was really building up to something great. At 0:13 it kinda ruined the trancy feeling it had though. The hihat was too sharp, and the percussion needed alot of work. It sounds like the standard FL-Studio samples.
The break at 1:04 was really awkward and weird. Though the part after that is the best part in the whole song. I liked the way it builded up until 1:32. The transition could be way better, and by that i mean, that you could've added a filter or made some percussion changes. The places at 1:58 was really weird as a breakdown in my opinion, and it sounded a kinda random at places.
The kick with delay shouldn't be there. The place after that is really enjoyable btw, until the "climax" came in at 2:50. It ruined it bigtime, because of the cheap percussion samples.
All in all: Good work on the chord progression. Mastering is OK, and the percussion is not good. Focus on the percussion at on the mixing next time you make a trance song, and don't be afraid of repeat the same part sometimes, because it's trance.
Trance is repetive.
Good try still
3/5 Helth
November 16, 2009
Author's Response:
Oh look mommy! It's a troll!
-Gravey-
