Didn't quite make it

Well i've been leaving a lot of reviews today, so here goes one for this song. Sorry to break the news, but for some reason this song didn't quite do it for me. Now some people may feel otherwise, but to me it just sounded really.."plucky".. It was a good attempt, but with a little more work i think you could be on the right path. Keep on trying and you can only improve! And what program do you use? Fl studio? (which i use) Feel free to contact me on AIM for anything. (check my profile for it)