Nice job!

I think this was a very good attempt at hardcore style. The beat definitely kept it up and the intro building up to the main synth was great. My only problem with this song was with the kick. It seemed almost too powerful. While a big booming kick is a must in this style, it raped the synth which you don't want to do. Just try turning it down a little bit, but keep the nice distortion you have going on with it!