My review of your song/loop.
While 80ish people will hear this, you'll probably hear it a lot more yourself. No reason to shoot yourself down.
The piece is short, sounds like an intro.
Very background mixed, could use percussion or a closer sounding synth. (Limiters/compression/volume increase) Just general more completion.
The bass fumble sounds at beginning, 0:29, 0:59, very clearly suggest this is one loop 3 times, in a looping format on the site. May as well have just made it loop once.
Notes are nice, sticks to a key (makes sense musically).
Guitar plink sound is unique sounding, its not like every other trance blip sound out there.
Overall this is fine, just super short and sounding incomplete.
3/5 7/10 Not bad, not great. sounds like more work is needed.