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Sep 1, 2009 | 6:40 PM EDT
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2.9 MB
2 min 31 sec
4.32 / 5.00

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Rated 4.32 / 5 stars
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Electronic - Techno

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I've been doing tons of experimenting lately with fruity loops, drums, keyboard, melody making etc...

I found very simple piano melody that I'm trying to work into a techno groove, the first minute and 15 seconds I'm making for my opener, and here it is

now I have SOO many ideas for this that I don;t know where to start, so all the reviews I can get would help a lot PLEASE!!!

and don't give 1's and 2's... I know it's better than that lol

closing note- I'm still a novice at fruity loops and novice with melody making, but I think I can turn this into something. as I make more to this I will continuously update it on here

p.s- I know the drums are iffy on this but for now it gave it some more depth and a possible direction to go



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

I liked it

Not really the best i have heard but i'll be honest, in my opinion it is good. Nice work dude good song!

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Barrellaj responds:

thanks alot mate ;]

simplicity goes along way


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


yes i can see your very new to FL but your not bad. when i started i sucked... now check me out (im half ass xD) but the grove comes from you i like how your not a repeat UM TIS UM TIS kinda guy. not a bad Arp you used .... now find a pad and follow in long notes on the main lead in a 3 octave corde to give it feeling, polish it with a Bass line that Bands in a underlayed style to your drums to give it depth, give it a counter melody to bring this song to life i would pick a nice Saw or pluck

very space ambent feel dude but not bad once again

4 vote 7 stars
3.18 / 5.00 (+ 0.42)

if you like check my song out! i love feed back on my "WoW... its hip hop?" beat.

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Barrellaj responds:

lol, well yes I'm a noob to fls, but I made this in about an hour or so

and everything you told me to do I've already thought of especially the saw/ pluck idea- I've already picked the saw I'm using ( still not good enough on 3xosc to make my own :P)

but thank you for a good review, I will be sure to let you know when I finish my song, and feel free to check out some of my other unfinished projects, I've got a bunch of them, they should give you an idea of my versatility and what I want to do

again thanks for a positive honest review

edit- and what do you mean nice arp? if you mean my melody I actually made that myself :P

2nd edit- I added more to the song and sped it up a bit, and the new synth I actually managed to make myself on 3xosc :P