Beast!

The distortion kind of adds to the brutality of this song, making it even more of a monster to slay with my mushles! :D Good job, even though the distortion is an error... Good job!

Well...

At least it's somewhat on key. However, the distortion guitar is a little too prominent.. I dunno how to describe it except it's kind of how something played on the piano sounds when too much pedal is used, if you're familiar with that sound. Try using fading a little so it's not just the same volume all the way through.

With some tweaking, this concept could work. Keep practing and maybe someday you can do a remake of this.